Feeling Alive
So this is Feeling Alive. I will most likely change the name...
I'm not quiet sure how this is going to work out so if you've read any of my other books you may have noticed I tend to write some gory scenes and some romantic. Just warning you case you can't take that sort of thing. ;)
I'm still looking for a main pic...
Prologue
I lay on the floor of a cold, damp, dark, room. I had been asleep for a long time and yet nothing made sense and I understood nothing.
Footsteps, a door opening, light…. It’s so strange… so beautiful…
A tall man looks over me, but I can’t see his face from the brilliance of the gray light. “You waken.” He said, sounding slightly surprised. “Do you feel anything?”
“Feel?” I wonder trying to make sense of the simple word. I struggle with the word a moment and it slowly came to me. “I feel nothing…”
The man nodded. “I didn’t think you would.”
Words lay waiting on my lips wishing to spill, but I wouldn’t let them. I didn’t understand them or anything for that matter. Who I was, where… why. I mulled over the words the emptiness in my mind, but it was so difficult and making my head hurt.
The man sensed my discomfort. “Rest.” He told me. “You will feel well later.”
Darkness began to consume me again and I was forced to comply. Watching through my droopy eyelids as the door slowly shut and the beautiful gray light left with the man. I didn’t understand anything and it bugged me, but it was too late to think about that any further as everything was almost completely black again. Suddenly something I understood popped into my mind.
I exist…
There's the prologue! If your wondering the speaker is a boy and that's about all I can tell you.
Characters: (note: I update this with each chapter I post, this may be a spoiler if you have not yet caught up.)
(from prologue)
(I haven't decided for sure, but I think I will use this pic for him.)
Name: Than
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown (looks in his mid teens)
Personality: Doesn't remember anything about anything, has very little emotions, learned he is a robot.
(with green eyes)
Name: Alexandria Parkinson (Lexie)
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Personality: Peace Keeper, kind and gental. Perfectionist.
(with black hair)
Name: Randy
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Personality: Has a lot of secrets he keeps to himself. Likes to tease girls.
Name: Natalie Littlewoods
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Personality: Drama Queen, Rich, Fashionista.
(With shorter and darker hair)
Name: Megan Carter
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Personality: Tom boy, sporty, can be viscous when it comes to protecting her friends, laid-back.
(from the boys side of the story)
Name: Mrs Crimson
Gender: Female
Age: Late thirtys
Personality: Gets angry easy. Created Than.
Heres the school outfits.
Name: Mr. Helt
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Personality: Calm and thoughtful. He's a writer. Handsome.
(with black hair not blue)
Name: Mrs. Liverpool
Gender: Female
Age: 28
Personality: Snaps easily. Hates kids. loves to be nasty
Name: Miss Knitty (nicknamed Miss Nutty)
Gender: Female
Age: 25
Personality: An idiot... yep that pretty much sums her up.
(Dark green eyes)
Name: Mina Rhodes
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Personality: Dark and mysterious.
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Permalink Reply by Mina on
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Hey I love your book so far! Its amazing I cant wait for you to post more!
luv your friend with red hair p.s u saw me on the weekend k
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Holy Moly! I haven't put up a chapter in forever! I've been super stuck on a part though and I've just recently pulled through it. It may still be awhile before I finish the next chapter. Sorry its taking so long.
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Permalink Reply by Zhadow on
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this book is amazing Mina! I really like how u write. What made u decide to write this book?
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O thanks!
K here is the story of how this book came along.
I was on break from school and thought. "I'm going to write a new book and its going to be about a robot boy and school girl." Total thinking time: 5 seconds.
And that is the faboulous story of how Feeling Alive came along.
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