The Christian Crusaders: The Desert Journey
I am writing a book and I will be posting it on this discussion.(I am so excited!) So the story behind my story is interesting. I just started typing a paragraph because i was going to show my dad something on the internet and i came up with the prologue that you are going to be reading. I had no intentions of it being a story, but here I am. This is my very first time doing this so I may not post the chapters very fast, but I will try my best. That's about all, so I hope you enjoy reading my book.
Oh, and one more thing. I am not tyring to be or anything, but those of you who read this please do not take any parts or ideas from my book. Thanks and enjoy!
Characters
Clayton:
Kylie:
Jason:
Zafar:
Joseph Koney: He is a real person and is really, really bad. I mean bad.
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Permalink Reply by Dub Kid on -
Chapter Two
Both I and Jason began searching for Kylie and calling out here name. “Kylie!” I yelled. “Kylie!” Jason began calling her name too. “She has to be around here somewhere.” I siad to myself. I walked away from Jason and started turning over some of the wreckage and looking through it. I saw Jason walk into what was left of the plane. The whole backside of the plane had been ripped off from the rest of its body.
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I began walking towards the front of the plane and I saw Kylie’s arm hanging over the armrest of a chair. I stopped in my tracks. “Clayton! I found her in the plane!” I quickly ran up to the seat she was sitting to and began unbuckling her seatbelt.
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A gust of wind blew some stuff over the ground. I was still looking through the wreckage when I heard Jason’s yell. I quickly ran into the plane and saw him pulling Kylie out of the seat she was in. She looked dead, but I tried to think about something else.
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I saw Clayton run in and his face looked really worried. “She unconscious, but we need to let her get some rest.” My face turned grave and I looked back at Kylie. “It’s amazing she is still alive. Without that seatbelt………she wouldn’t be alive right now. I pulled her onto the ground and looked back at Clayton. We need to make her a bed and just let her sleep. She should regain consciousness soon, but she is going to have a massive head ache. “I got it.” Clayton said.
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I began looking through compartments and found some blankets and a pillow. I walked over to Jason and handed them to him. “Thanks.” He said. “You’re welcome.” Another gust of wind blew through the plane and I put my arms around myself and looked at my watch. “It’s 5:07.”It was starting to get dark and I was just realizing the severity of our situation. “Great. What was supposed to be a fun vacation has turned into a disaster.”
At seven o’clock Jason and I began to make some beds and found some wood to make a fire. I piled the wood up and opened the box of matches I had found. The air began to get cold and there was still a breeze. I lit the fire and the flames began to grow bigger. As I sat by the fire I wrapped myself up in a blanket. Then Jason came and sat next to the fire with me.
After we talked about our situation for a little bit we walked back into the plane and laid our blankets down. We would have a long day ahead of us tomorrow. As I was lying down I prayed that God would keep us safe and protect us from danger. We would need His help if we were going to get through this. I soon fell asleep, but Jason stayed up. ”I wonder if we’ll get out of this?” He thought.
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Permalink Reply by BTW on -
Two minor details.
1. When someone new is talking, you start a new paragraph
2. In the second chapter, you spelt said wrong.
Other then that I <3 it!!!!!!!!!! It sounds familiar:)
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Permalink Reply by Dub Kid on
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this is really exciting for me, because this is like the very first time i've started writing an actuall book.
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