Codebearers

Okay this is a whole new story idea I came up with that is kinda like my Elemental Leader series but isn't. Anyway....here is the prolouge-

             A hundred years ago a group known as the Souls protected a crystal flower called: Fairoze. But another group known as the Immortals took the stone right under their noses. But soon the Fairoze crumbled to dust from the Immortals wicked energy wavelengths to one another.The Immortals raged with anger while the Souls were soon disbanded as they all headed off to their normal lives in saddness.            A hundred years later the Fairoze returns to the shrine to be use once more.Now in the city of Rakel at the Achates Academy,students will all be tested to see who can lead the lost group: the Souls.When new student Avichayil Rinas arrives on the scene....things seem to shift.Meanwhile the Immortals are also reforming just as another group starts to appear from out of nowhere.Who is this mysterious group? What is their intention? And why does the leader of it have an eye for Avichayil? But will the Souls be formed in time to save the Fairoze? Or will the Immortals grab it again?

story sign:  the Fairoze Characters-

Avichayil Rinas Rumor Claythe Goodfellow Lalit

Luthais Kalil Kasmira Mari Jathniel Endlin

  Lisette Eny Japhet Aaron

  Emere Sissel

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Iscariot: Thank goodness!

Finally XP Jack just didn't suit him.

uh, she's still in trouble, guys!

awesome!!!!

no one word posts please?

it's kinda against the rules.

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(Part 3)

Rumor held up a note reading: 'I'll explain later.' Before turning back to Avi on the stone bed.
'Avi wake up,'thought Rumor urgently.
Eyelids fluttered open to reveal purple eyes with grey flecks underneath.
Avi looked to see her teammates'worry faces surrounding her.
With a slight turn to the left she could see Rumor's worry face.
Giving him a small smile,she slowly held up a hand as Rumor claped it in his with a small smile of his own.
Turning slightly to the right,she saw and equally worried Goodfellow.
She held out her right hand and Good gladly took it.
"Thank goodness your okay,"murmured Goodfellow.
"Its thanks to you guys,"whispered Avi nodding to Goodfellow and her teammates.
The other Souls all smiled back at her.
"Including you Rumor,"whispered Avi to Rumor.
Rumor felt tears brimming his eyes as he nodded to Avi.
Then her note star grew warm as ink started flowing towards the wound.
Avi flinch when the ink hit the wound,but sighed as the ink flowing into the wound to heal it.
'So glad your back Avi,'whispered Rumor with his mind.
Avi felt shivers run down her body and knew it was from Rumor.

she's gonna be okay.

thing is that she has two admirers(well, 3). who will be the one to win her?

Two will win her.....but who? *rubs hands together*

Yay! She's ok! 

Yeah! She made it!!

(Final part)

Avi soon fell asleep as the ink continue to heal the wound.
Rumor and Goodfellow still held her hands while the others sat down around the bed.
Avi watched as dream unfold before her,but this time it was different.
Avi found herself in a vast white room with a floor length mirror.
She eyed the mirror just as a shadow of a teen appeared.
With sliverly light blue hair and stunning sliver eyes that were dust soft light blue.
He wore a black button down collar t-shirt, that was open, with a tattered red t-shirt underneath plus blue jeans and black shoes.
Around his neck he wore a black collar with a silver design etch on it.
He gave Avi a warm smile as he started to change.
His hair was the smae color but looked wind blown in a cool way.
His eyes were still stunning as they fixed soley on Avi.
Instead of a black button down shirt, it was a white one in its place.
Underneath he wore a black tattered t-shirt, while a white collar that had a black etch rested around his neck.
The pants and shoes stayed the same as Avi slowly took a step forward.
The teen urged her forward with his hand.
Avi slowly reached the mirror before resting her hand against the cool glass.
To her suprise the teen rested his hand against hers,making her gasp.
Feeling her face flush, Avi lowered her head the whispered,"Who are you?"
The teen in the mirror lowered its hand before writing: 'We will meet soon my flower," across the surface.

Chapter 20: Strange but Wonderful Dream

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