The Fairoze: Rise of the Souls
Okay this is a whole new story idea I came up with that is kinda like my Elemental Leader series but isn't. Anyway....here is the prolouge-
A hundred years ago a group known as the Souls protected a crystal flower called: Fairoze. But another group known as the Immortals took the stone right under their noses. But soon the Fairoze crumbled to dust from the Immortals wicked energy wavelengths to one another.The Immortals raged with anger while the Souls were soon disbanded as they all headed off to their normal lives in saddness. A hundred years later the Fairoze returns to the shrine to be use once more.Now in the city of Rakel at the Achates Academy,students will all be tested to see who can lead the lost group: the Souls.When new student Avichayil Rinas arrives on the scene....things seem to shift.Meanwhile the Immortals are also reforming just as another group starts to appear from out of nowhere.Who is this mysterious group? What is their intention? And why does the leader of it have an eye for Avichayil? But will the Souls be formed in time to save the Fairoze? Or will the Immortals grab it again?
story sign: 
the Fairoze 
Characters-
Avichayil Rinas 
Rumor Claythe 
Goodfellow Lalit
Luthais Kalil 
Kasmira Mari 
Jathniel Endlin 
Lisette Eny 
Japhet Aaron 
Emere Sissel 
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Permalink Reply by BladeAngel on -
Renwer:*note-'Awesome!'*
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(Part 2)
Rumor headed out into the hallway when one of Avichayil's friends hurrily pass him.
He realized it was the white haired girl,who was always eating lunch with Avi.
Rumor hurried after the girl before she could disappear behind a door down the hall.
Panting,he held up a note reading:
'Excuse me.'
The girl turned around,then gasped when she saw who it was.
"Oh hey Jack whats up?"greeted Emere.
Rumor let the note dispate while he pulled out the plushie,that was wrapped mysteriously with black paper dotted with silver stars with a small card on top.
Holding it in one hand,he pulled out another note then showed it to Emere:
"Can you put this on Avi's night table?'
"Oh sure! Not at all,"said Emere taking the present.
Rumor smiled his thanks then continued on down the hallway.
Emere watched Rumor leave before checking out the present.
It was bulky,but light,soft and squishy she figured.
Deflated with curiousity,Emere placed the present as promise on Avi's night table before giving it one more look over.
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Permalink Reply by Bladebearer on -
*giggles*
some girls are gonna get jealous
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Permalink Reply by BladeAngel on
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Including you know who :)
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Permalink Reply by Dub Kid on -
i just finished getting caught up on the story and guess what. i am loving it!!!!!!
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Permalink Reply by BladeAngel on
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Me happy then ^~^
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Permalink Reply by Silver Phoenix on -
diddo!
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(Part 3)
[Outside academy]
The Immortals made it to the back of the academy and waited silently.
Cassiel nodded to Shith,who stepped up to the door,opened it an inch and peeked inside.
Smiling Shith pushed the door open,allowing everyone in.
They kept to the shadows as they moved to the door marked: 'Sanctum'.
Quickly,Jacy and Ram pushed open the door to a bigger room with the shrine's entrance.
Hurrying over,Cassiel pressed his hand over the door and soon felt it shudder.
Second later the door crumbled to pieces,revealing a dimly lit passageway.
Shith and the others quickly formed up behind him as Cassiel carefully stepped over the ruined door.
"Well that was easy,"commented Rigg.
"Yeah no one spotted us yet,"agreed Jacy.
"Soon they will spot us...but we'll be ready,"said Cassiel as he followed the passage,which soon opened to a brick style cavern room.
In the middle of the room sat a white podium holding the Fairoze in its safe box.
"The Fairoze,"whispered Cassiel starting forward,but stopped before giving Shith a short nod.
Shith nodded back the hurried up to the podium.
Grabbing the box in one fluid motion,Shith hurried back to Cassiel and held it out to him.
[Inside academy- nurses's office]
Avichayi's eyes snapped open in shocked as she sat up in the small bed.
'Oh no...,'thought Avichsyil,'The Fairoze...its gone.'
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Permalink Reply by Silver Phoenix on
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Uh oh! Not good!
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