The Title Series, book one: The Felixi
This is the first book I ever finished! Feel free to read the original version or the new and improved version. I also created an RPG that connects to this book and the second and third book so feel free to read those when your done!
Well I hope you enjoy this! Just to warn you there may been some creepy parts to the book, romance and gore.
Please feel free to give comments. Don't copy this either please. This is my hard work, I put it up here for people to enjoy, not copy. Thank you and enjoy! -^-^-
First version: Pg 1-27
Rewritten version: Pg 28-
The Felixi
(Rewritten version)
By Mina
Prologue
On the other side of another world from earth is a wonderful kingdom. The kingdom is perfect in every way, without sickness or death and the people live there happily forever and ever. The King of this kingdom is known as The Great King, for he is better than any other king who has come. He is the one who created the universe and everything within it with his awesome and magnificent power. Everyone in the kingdom has incredible powers and can do things no human could do, but the King has such power that all tremble before him. Even though he is frightening he is also loving and loves all of his people so much that no one can even begin to understand how much he does.
One day, one of the King’s closest advisors decided he wanted power like his master and he wanted to become a great king. So secretly he began plotting and working out an idea of how he could take down the King. When he felt ready he took his own son, who was a mind reader, and mutated him until he created his own power, a dark and vile power. A power that destroys and eats away not like The Great King had created and planned. In secret he taught his son how to harness his powers in hopes of destroying The Great King. What he never expected was his own son wanted power for himself. In his greed he killed his own father and went after the throne himself. The Great King was not one to loose though and in an epic battle defeated the boy. The Great King was furious with him though and banished him to the other side where the mortals lived.
The boy grew and made a name for himself “The great lord” and he was the terror of the land and mutated a few more of his kind quickly multiplying and creating his own kingdom. He had a son of his own who took his place and did even more evil then his father. Slowly their kind created enough of themselves to attack the largest nation on the planet beginning the longest war the world had and would, ever know…
Characters: (Spoiler Alert!)
Here's a pic of Darson, He would look older, have slightly darker hair, eyes would be less creepy and he wouldn't be pouting.
Mike, the bully
Darson's mom. I never really gave her a name. She wouldn't be sad though.
Tanya. Darson's sister
The S.C.A.M
Felixivent, He would look less evil (For now) and he would also have a slightly smaller forehead.
So this pic is the closest I could get to Newton. He'd have black hair and green eyes though.
Heres Miya! If her hair was just the tiny bit longer she'd be perfect.
This pic kinda looks like Rea. She would have more orange in her hair and have yellow eyes.
Adamina! (thank you Zhadow!!!!)
Heres Nathan! He'd look just a bit older. 
Christine
Zak
Levi's mask! (^)
Levi (v) (He would have purple eyes)
Zia
How to pronounce some words
Felixi: felixE
Darson: Not Darsin, but Darson (kinda french)
Felixivent: felixE vent
Athia: athEa
Galena (gal E na)
Galenian (gal E n E in)
(If you find any other hard to pronounce words in this book plz tell me)
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Permalink Reply by Silver Phoenix on -
I'm glad Newton survived.
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Permalink Reply by BladeAngel on -
Me too i'm happy
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Permalink Reply by Silver Phoenix on
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Totally. I thought it was a nice touch.
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Permalink Reply by Mina on -
Oh good! I really loved writing it because they were totally meant for each other. Then writing them in the Escapees. *laugh* they're so cute!
Although sadly Levi needs to turn to the dark side so he's going to have a sad story in the RPG. ;(
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Permalink Reply by Mina on
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Hey guys! I was just rereading this book again. I love watching how much my work has grown! Anywho I have some important things I'd like to point out.
1. Silvermoon pointed out awhile ago that the characters seem more in the 13-14 age group not the 15-16 age group and I totally agree. As I'm beginning the (long and painful) rewrite I'm changing the ages. Darson will be 14 in this book and in the next he won't be 18 but 16.
2. I wanted to explain what books there are because I made a mistake with the second one.
Book 1: The Felixi
Book 2: The Itaki
Book 3: The Peacekeeper
Extra: The Escapees
So I'm going to keep the second book as the peacekeeper for now until I finish it (so no one gets confused) then I'll change the name at the end.
Thanks for reading! I would have never finished my first book if it weren't for your guys support. :)
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Permalink Reply by Mina on
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Ta-da! I went to work on the Prologue of this book. I realized I never made one and came up with a cool one! XD Also I feel that God has been calling me to write this book for him so I'll be changing a lot to make it just perfect. X) I don't know when I'll have more time to rewrite, but we'll see.
The Felixi
(Rewritten version)
By Mina
Prologue
On the other side of another world from earth is a wonderful kingdom. The kingdom is perfect in every way, without sickness or death and the people live there happily forever and ever. The King of this kingdom is known as The Great King, for he is better than any other king who has come. He is the one who created the universe and everything within it with his awesome and magnificent power. Everyone in the kingdom has incredible powers and can do things no human could do, but the King has such power that all tremble before him. Even though he is frightening he is also loving and loves all of his people so much that no one can even begin to understand how much he does.
One day, one of the King’s closest advisors decided he wanted power like his master and he wanted to become a great king. So secretly he began plotting and working out an idea of how he could take down the King. When he felt ready he took his own son, who was a mind reader, and mutated him until he created his own power, a dark and vile power. A power that destroys and eats away not like The Great King had created and planned. In secret he taught his son how to harness his powers in hopes of destroying The Great King. What he never expected was his own son wanted power for himself. In his greed he killed his own father and went after the throne himself. The Great King was not one to loose though and in an epic battle defeated the boy. The Great King was furious with him though and banished him to the other side where the mortals lived.
The boy grew and made a name for himself “The great lord” and he was the terror of the land and mutated a few more of his kind quickly multiplying and creating his own kingdom. He had a son of his own who took his place and did even more evil then his father. Slowly their kind created enough of themselves to attack the largest nation on the planet beginning the longest war the world had and would, ever know…
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