Writings of the Poetic variety
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Permalink Reply by Bladebearer on -
it's really cool.
however, think the ending might be a little to watery. doesn't seem to do it justice. that's just me though
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Permalink Reply by Mystery on -
Yes, I was having a bit of trouble with it, but that's the best I could come up with.
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Permalink Reply by Bladebearer on
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I went digging on my computer.
Here's an oldie of mine:
How can this be?
I look around,
But I don't believe what I see.
Many say that I'm part of a “cult”.
They just don't understand.
It isn't their fault.
Just because my Sabbath
Is on a different day
Doesn't mean they have the right to say
That I'm going to go straight to hell.
The way I see it
We all drink the same living water
From the same eternal Well.
We just believe things differently.
I don't have the right to tell
Someone that just because
They worship on one day
And I on another
That they aren't any more or less
My Christian sister or brother.
We will all be judged
By what we believe.
All I can do
When asked “Why?”
Is tell others why I believe
What I believe,
And try not to be shy.
And, if the need be,
We'll just agree
To disagree.
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Permalink Reply by manthasds on -
thats really good. heres one of my recent ones.
i feel...
the drive to go
to join
to live
to survive
a feel none can take away
a breath of unity
blown free among the living
the colorless being
telling us
to be united
a single soul
strengthened in the beleif
of one thing
to be the voice
made out of many
the gift of unity's mighty roar
it makes me feel...
together.
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Permalink Reply by Lexi on -
I don't have a poetic bone in my body...so last night I posted one on my blog dealio....:P
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Permalink Reply by Explorerdude on
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he he.
here's one i saw in a book a while back:
Ode To A Fish:
Oh, wet pet!
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Permalink Reply by Mystery on
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Explorer (and fyi can I use your real name? Explorer just ain't the same bro): I posted that one on the old site
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Permalink Reply by Explorerdude on
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no.
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Permalink Reply by Bladebearer on
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so here I am
far from you
wondering just what
I would do
if i ever see you again
My dearest friend
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yeah it a work in progress
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