Ooh... I can almost imagine this as a scene from a crime movie or TV show or something like that. :)
Oh, thats good. I was going for that kind of feel!
Well, you did a great job achieving it.
The acting drunk was a great touch! I have a friend who can do it quite well... XD
lol drunk impersonations are hilarious.
They really are! XD
Well, that seemed shorter than usual... Make sure to get the next part written soon! :)
Aye aye capn!
*dies inside from curiosity*