Warning! Outside of school this is the first full length poem I've written so its not very good. :P

Also, its kinda dark because I was in dark mood. Enjoy anyway! ... if you dare. >:D

The End

 

The wind howls, the sun hides,

My life is over and I must abide.

 

I’m standing there in pain,

With nothing left to gain.

My heart keeps aching,

Everything I touch is breaking.

 

I look around to see if there’s any light,

But if I try I feel the bite.

I try to hold onto hope

But I just don’t think I can cope

 

Finally I lie down to die,

I have a big cry.

The tears run down my face fast,

After all, they are my last.

 

Then finally the end came,

It took me away like an innocent dame.

I looked back with sudden regret.

Should I have tried to face the threat?

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Comment by Mina on October 30, 2012 at 4:33pm
Aww thanks.
Comment by Emily#2 on October 30, 2012 at 4:28pm

wow.........its a poem i actually like!  great job!

Comment by Karnivore on October 18, 2012 at 11:01pm

Interesting means i like it!!!! XD

Comment by Mina on October 14, 2012 at 3:08pm

thanks... I think....

Comment by Karnivore on October 13, 2012 at 3:53pm

Oooo. Interesting....

Comment by Amara Tanith on September 22, 2012 at 6:32pm
O dear,this is never good
Comment by Mina on September 22, 2012 at 4:35pm

*chuckles* I know what you mean.

Comment by Silver Phoenix on September 22, 2012 at 4:17pm

I like it! Now you're getting me in a dark mood. *grins*

Comment by Mina on September 22, 2012 at 12:51pm

Thank you! ^^

Comment by Amara Tanith on September 22, 2012 at 12:26pm

oooooh, nice. It's haunting and dark (always the best kinds)

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