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I had to write a four to six stanza poem for English today and here's what I got.

I wish to fly

Oh so high

And disappear

Into the sky

For it is full 

Of my dreams

Lost forever

Or so it seems

The world appears

Very dull

When you're stuck

In a lull

After one visit

To that starry sky

You return to earth

Yearning again to fly

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Comment by Misty Illusion on May 27, 2016 at 9:24am

That was great! I like it. Heh heh, the teachers are grading your blog post.

Comment by Melody on May 24, 2016 at 5:50am

XD that's what mom gave it too! Lol

Comment by Bladebearer on May 23, 2016 at 5:46pm

The short lines making up each stanzas flow beautifully. It's simple yet brings up great imagery. I'd give it an A.

Comment by Melody on May 23, 2016 at 5:11pm

Thanks guys. ( I've written other before so this isn't my first just the first one I've posted on codebearers.)

Comment by Hope on May 23, 2016 at 4:40pm
I like it. I remember my first poem....
Comment by Raelynn/Raelin/Raylinn on May 23, 2016 at 3:43pm

That was awesome! I love it! :D

Comment by DatGlutenFReeChef on May 23, 2016 at 3:37pm

;)

Comment by Melody on May 23, 2016 at 3:22pm

XD thanks Ringwraith

Comment by DatGlutenFReeChef on May 23, 2016 at 1:53pm

Comment by Melody on May 23, 2016 at 12:36pm

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